10 Comments

  1. Joyce bukai says:

    That is how you be nice to other people and how they threet you and if you help others by doing teamwork to gether

  2. Joyce bukai says:

    If you have a very hard homework and other people have trouble with it you should do teamwork

  3. Arlene Natkin says:

    I learned from this story that if you work with teamwork you’ll do very good

  4. Raphael ammar says:

    Nice writing

  5. Grandpa Morris says:

    Dear Freddy,

    I love what you wrote and I am very proud of you!!!

    Love you,
    Grandpa Morris

  6. Michael Granat says:

    In every aspect of life; from the earliest level of school to big business corporations, from sports teams to entire nations-teamwork is the single most important quality. Thinking of only one’s self will only lead to failure. Very well thought and written!!! Love it!!!

  7. Terri Sitt says:

    I love this!! It’s so well written. I find it so inspiring and hope that other people appreciate the message that teamwork will get you so much further in life.

  8. Uncle Doug says:

    “Sometimes the thing that brings us together also pulls us apart. Sort of like a zipper.
” That thing is unselfishness. It holds us together or rips us apart if we are selfish.
    ― Jarod Kintz,

  9. Anonymous says:

    Great story

    1. Anonymous says:

      The strength of the team is each individual member. The strength of each member is the team

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